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Tuesday 1 November 2016

Camp narrative

The Big Secret

One sunny, bright and happy day at Camp Raglan the teachers started to act suspicious. The year 5s and 6s from PCS had gone to Camp-it was the school’s first “proper” Camp. Everybody had all their sun protection on and they had been hanging out for a swim all day. Eventually they got their swim and it was dinner time.

 The teachers all sat together whispering about something but the children just couldn’t guess what it was they were doing. “ Maybe they are aliens from outer space” said Molly who was that friend who was just a little bit “out there” if you get what I mean. “ I don’t think so “ said Willow who didn’t really believe any of that at all. “ Maybe they’re going to send someone home “ Grace mentioned “ that’s much more believable Molly ” Willow gave Molly a look. At bedtime since these girls were in a sleeping group and next to the teachers they could hear the teachers still talking about something but they just could not make out what it was they talking about.

The next day it was their last day at Camp Raglan-or so they thought. The teachers didn’t start packing up and everyone was confused then the teachers went around saying to everyone that there was a surprise at base. Once everyone was outside the teachers announced that they were staying for three more days! All the children were really excited and they lived happily ever after for the next three days then they went home.

Tomorrow we are going on a three day camp at Camp Raglan and everybody is super excited about it. To tie in with that we wrote some narratives about camp. This is my one, enjoy!

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Amie,
    I really like the fact that you imagined what it might be like at camp, you really like to put yourself out there and that is amazing. Maybe next time you could think about putting some more details in about the day so that it is a bit more exciting.
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  2. Hello Amie, I really like the detail you put into your writing. Maybe next time you could add a photo or some more information.
    Ka Pai Amai you writing was phenomanal, Could you please check my blog out, I'm always looking for feedback and ways I can improve

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  3. Thank you for the comments feedback is always very helpful.

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